Minority Report: Worst Moment Comments
I really liked your comments, which came from deep inside, where you put aside your own personalities and "became" the main characters. This is what we always want readers to do with our books, right?
But just for a moment, stop being in the movie emotionally, and redefine "worst moment for the characters" intellectually as: the moment where it seems as if there is no way, absolutely no way, out. This must be true for both the main characters.
Hard one, eh?
(eh? is a Canadianism).
So, think hard. Where exactly do you realize that the two main characters are totally scrooped. (seemingly).
Back to bed.
Keep at it, guys, you're doing great work.
Hugs from Welwyn